Friday, October 5, 2018

And Death Lingers On Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a twisted frame death lingers alive,
Pale rotting teeth ensconced in sunken jaw,
Nails crooked, bent inward like a clenched palm,
Death kept at bay by food forced on unwilling maw.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 October 2018

In hospital no better than a jail, to her might be better all the same, For forty years oh ever since that night, Violated she was when in inhuman shame......pragmatic! Your have brilliantly captured the hospital scene! Very nice work.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2018

When people that know appreciate the poem you've penned it gives great feelings. I have written a few poems on euthanasia and many on death. Thank you Dr Swain

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Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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