Monday, November 28, 2005

And Death Came Comments

Rating: 4.1

When death came
Like the fierce rain of Summer
when death came and drained his body
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Phillip Whiteman 01 March 2006

erm...it again feels forced. i'm sure you feel these things but you could balance it more. you have great ideas and philosophies, just relax and let it come when inspired, there's no need to rush.

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Peter A. Crowther 03 December 2005

I enjoyed reading this poem; it has a haunting quality

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