Wednesday, April 5, 2006

And Black (Prose Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night falls; the day disintegrates. All in a moment.

Have I been sleeping, or, is it a miracle? No-one can answer for me. I close the shutters of my mind, but always there is something. Always something there; no way of escape. Soon there will be another day, I know that – the mind cannot rest, but today, all I have done is forgotten. I can feel it, always the burden is there. Today, always there is a brooding yesterday, tomorrow will be another today.
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Bournemouth Lass 13 August 2006

Stunning, an incredably evoctaive peice. It's use of the rythem of words gives it a pulse...Wonderful! : -)

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Onyeka Nwelue 05 April 2006

This is unbeatable! I can't believe that such a wonderful might ever be written. Albeit, some write prose poems, but this is INDOMITABLE!

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Malcolm Evison

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