Thoughtless I am, I've chosen you over all else.
I will burn cities for you.
I would sacrifice my innocence for you.
I will never let you give up.
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Lovely poem. Can be interpreted on many levels. It's great with intensity of emotions.
There is such a word as RUNAWAY, but it is a noun. Here you should have used two words: RUN AWAY. Congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day!
I love this poem. Reminded me of when I felt that way, almost made me cry. Its beautiful.
Tlhe subject lady of this poem should really be honored, for not many will do all the things your will do for her. Written with authority and plenty of gusto. Good Job. Your friend Lynn
I loved it, it had an the air of an old time romance, kinda reminded me of Romeo & Juliet...10!
very beautiful :) it touched my heart. its full of emotion and is very deep. i loved it :) well done :)
wow... this is really deep, full of emotion and i love it! def. a 10.
So very beautiful. Well penned and very deserving of being chosen. Congrats!