Sunday, April 18, 2010

And As I Fall (Follow Up To No Matter What) Comments

Rating: 3.4

Thoughtless I am, I've chosen you over all else.
I will burn cities for you.
I would sacrifice my innocence for you.
I will never let you give up.
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Adrian Cordova
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Bernard Snyder 25 July 2015

So very beautiful. Well penned and very deserving of being chosen. Congrats!

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Savita Tyagi 25 July 2015

Lovely poem. Can be interpreted on many levels. It's great with intensity of emotions.

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Ruby Mostazir 25 July 2015

Nice! I love this poem

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Kim Barney 25 July 2015

There is such a word as RUNAWAY, but it is a noun. Here you should have used two words: RUN AWAY. Congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day!

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 July 2015

It is really a good poem with love flowing thick.

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Cassandra Nicks 10 July 2010

I love this poem. Reminded me of when I felt that way, almost made me cry. Its beautiful.

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Cira Cortes 30 June 2010

i really like this one :) 10!

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loNeLY AnGel 19 April 2010

i love this poem...... well done.....10/10

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Leila Taghavi 18 April 2010

You could write the poem lovely. congratulations!

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Lynn Glover 18 April 2010

Tlhe subject lady of this poem should really be honored, for not many will do all the things your will do for her. Written with authority and plenty of gusto. Good Job. Your friend Lynn

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Darlene Styles 18 April 2010

love it 10! ! :))) its really nice

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Claire Hunter 18 April 2010

I loved it, it had an the air of an old time romance, kinda reminded me of Romeo & Juliet...10!

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Sherri Coulter 18 April 2010

love is all there is--unless it isn't.10+ lovely content.

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Summer H. 18 April 2010

very beautiful :) it touched my heart. its full of emotion and is very deep. i loved it :) well done :)

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Stephanie Robertson 18 April 2010

wow... this is really deep, full of emotion and i love it! def. a 10.

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Jesse Palma 18 April 2010

very touching poem, it's quotable for sure, i gave it a 10

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