Wednesday, July 11, 2007

! And Angels Comments

Rating: 2.7

The air from earth to Moon
honey-gold with souls and angels;

our every breath, rich with their spirit;
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Michael Shepherd
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Chuck Petz 03 November 2008

Lovely and thought provoking

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Fay Slimm 22 August 2008

Thank you dear Michael for opening such an insight into the unseen world. This will be among my favourites.

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Shannon Wright 28 December 2007

Thank you for sharing, this was a pleasure to read and i look forward to reading more of what you've written! - shannon

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Original Unknown Girl 12 September 2007

Oh this is beautiful too, I love that line 'honey-gold with angels'. I have a belief that we have our angels all around us, protecting us in our times of need, this poem tells me it's true, I love how you wrote it, gorgeous penning. HG: -) xx

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Gina Onyemaechi 16 August 2007

...The air, honey-gold with wonder; we, breathing angels, angels breathing us... Melts on the tongue, Michael. Words to lift the soul.

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Janice M Pickett 17 July 2007

Great write Michael...hehe it's me Jan..Nice to be back to read some of my dera favourites here. I love the truth in this poem and get the feeling your spiritual side has had some serious awakening since we last chatted. Big Hug. Jan

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Chris Mendros 13 July 2007

A harsh duty on those ‘daimons’, to bring us woes that test us for our later good. Our curses mean to them, but duty done. we curse them for the misery we blame them for, forgetting what others have suffered. Very moving, and thought provoking.

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M, this isn't my usual cup of tea or glass of wine or whatever... but I love it. Instantly calmed. t x

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Ernestine Northover 11 July 2007

I feel this is rather moving and beautiful Michael, certainly a new slant. A delight to read, the pleasure was mine, and I loved the last two lines. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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