For when two hearts do fall in love
The sun will shine in skies above,
When flowers bloom and colours glow
And crystal streams will gently flow.
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The feeling of love and lost love pictured throu the change of nature is beutiful. Thanks
Oh, WOW! ! ! ! ! ! What more can I say, this one was superb. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Andrew, this is beautifull, your flow of connecting nature with the way your heart flows is really excellent and gently penned to express your love that will forever burn....... Bonnie
Iambic pentameter is the perfect meter for this poem (like Shakespeare's sonnets) . It matches the romantic mood beautifully and carries the reader with ease and grace. I love the way you have used the seasons to mirror the emotions you share with such eloquence in this bitter-sweet love poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
how well you connect the nature with the sentiments..Nature always comes to our aid for expression. perfect composition and soul soothing poem.
What a beautiful poem, Andrew. I often find it very difficult to write about such heartbreaking events as you describe here and do any kind of justice to the subject. This is not, just another tearjerker. It is so wonderfully written. Very inspiring. Thanks, highest marks. Richard
So beautiful and yet so sad, you have such talent Andrew, please give yourself a well-earned pat on the back...YOU'RE A STAR * Love duncan X
This is really a wonderful poem Andrew, very very touching a pleasure to read! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
Beautifully written rhymes..love is lost love is found always for eternity... a ten from me.