Thursday, September 18, 2008

And, And, And Comments

Rating: 5.0

She smiles to try and stop the tears
and laughs to put him back at ease
Even after so many years
her fragile heart he still will tease
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Tia Maria
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Laurie Hill 13 February 2009

I love this one Tia..10

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Livvy Peacock 10 December 2008

That is a simply beautiful poem. It is so wel written.12 out of 10.

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Tom Balch 29 September 2008

This is a lovely well penned piece Tia,10 from Tom

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Fay Slimm 23 September 2008

You are showing your tender loving heart here Tia. Wishing good to those who have at times hurt us is the ultimate aim of love. Bless you from Fay.

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Kris Smith 18 September 2008

Build a dam hold back the tears, for you life shall be rich in future years 10 Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 18 September 2008

It's hard to see the one that you have loved, just walk away... A painful and touching write Tia... Andy x

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David Threadgold 18 September 2008

Hi Tia. A very moving piece well done.10. Regards Dave T.

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Callie Carroll 18 September 2008

Painful and true. Thanks for sharing.

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