[I wrote this poem in response to Robert Frost's 'Fire and Ice']
I was told that the cause for our end
(In an inevitable cosmic amend)
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You have written a great poem, summed up in the last stanza by the words 'yes it does matter how you live your life'.
Does it matter if its fire and ice Even if they do suffice? But it matters how you’ve led your life Though you may live once or twice. true to the core, of your poetry the readers want more, the readers want more
Commonsense penned poetically and with a smile. A thoughtful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
yes sir...I concur...yet up to now i vnt done very nasty things in my life...time to change i guess.....i vnt read the Robert's Frost Piece...but i feel this is a great professional response to a great poet of all time...nice one 10++ regards shan
fire is cause for everything.kindly read my 'fire&flower'.it has two face and one is ice(water) .a brave man die only once.let us not talk about people who die many times. you have written a wonderfull poem. i can only vote 10 for you. love surya
doubts may rise, confusions covers our mind, lets all accept them all, coz it might be nice..grace
'And All that's Nice' tells what matters most in life...that's 'Live Your Life'... this has been told in style and that's what matters most...a realisitc write...10
As long as life lead like a fire The ice, sure to extinguish it. So bringing both Fire and ice into picture. With these Fire and Ice taking their relevance Life and death possible several times In one life itself. The great poet had a inclination on - 'Fire' - for the end of life on earth. In the present context - one is dying each day several times. It difficult to think beyond up to the end of the world. Thank you. Good read.
An amusing surmise of fire and ice with a wink and your input well done great read regards uavanice1
Truely i hope you dont take this as an insult because i mean it with the greatest respect but you should really write some tounge in cheek childrens books like Dr. Seuss or 'where the sidewalk ends' im not exactly sure but reading this really reminds me of those
Oh the joy of finding a real poet..... now off to read Mr. Frost.................thank you....wonderful poetry....John
Some practice being Supreme Is the cause to live the heaven on earth, ..................I like this lines.............Good Write...10+++.............
Very true. It only matters how you' ve led your life. A beautiful poem full of thought contents.........10/10. Best Regards Naseer
A great poem indeed - common sense expressed in pefect rhymes...10/10 from me.