And a falling star
Will relieve you
From the shadowless and sorrowful
Solitude of marble....
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how lucky the woman is, such wonderful dedication. Keep on sharing!
A dedication of wisdom indeed for the lady with the falling star to open your thoughts...very nice to read...regards
Beautiful imagery. Short, sweet, meaningful. I hope whomever it is dedicated to read and appreciated it!
When you will rise hopelessly from prayer The twilight will fade ........................................ Romeo, it's very beautifully Thanks for the comment, and for your poetry.... they are so remarkable.. Tsira,
A beautiful poem with plenty of wisdom. Though written very simply, ideas are deep and moving. Nice write.
rom the shadowless and sorrowful Solitude of marble.... When you will rise hopelessly from prayer The twilight will fade In the black of your beautiful eyes...... strong conviction with strength of prayer.. nicely worded and appealing too....10
An encouraging poem, uplifts and edifies. Wonderfully done; D
Metaphor Epochal…with swing [You shall be a happy] and de-swing [I doubt it...]…these poetic Topsy Turvy bear high poetic vibes and readers imbibe more calorie…fine concept… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
I do hope the person this beautiful poem was dedicated to read it and it worked its magic on her.
Your poem makes me think, 'He must think of beautiful poems every day! This poem lifted my spirits today and i say THANK YOU! : ]
Has sentimental elements I might never understand. But that's the beauty of dedications, right?
sheer amazingness! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
This is an amazing poem jsut the title itself caught my attention keep it up
beautifully written... a painting of the heart!