Tuesday, June 30, 2009

And A Falling Star Comments

Rating: 4.7

And a falling star
Will relieve you
From the shadowless and sorrowful
Solitude of marble....
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Romeo Della Valle
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Eric Cockrell 08 August 2011

beautifully written... a painting of the heart!

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Cheryl Aldea 02 August 2011

how lucky the woman is, such wonderful dedication. Keep on sharing!

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Ken E Hall 05 June 2011

A dedication of wisdom indeed for the lady with the falling star to open your thoughts...very nice to read...regards

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Shadow Girl 10 May 2011

Beautiful imagery. Short, sweet, meaningful. I hope whomever it is dedicated to read and appreciated it!

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Tsira Gogeshvili 02 May 2011

When you will rise hopelessly from prayer The twilight will fade ........................................ Romeo, it's very beautifully Thanks for the comment, and for your poetry.... they are so remarkable.. Tsira,

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Abhay Vignesh L 01 March 2011

Wonderful poem radiating beacons of wisdom.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 November 2010

A beautiful poem with plenty of wisdom. Though written very simply, ideas are deep and moving. Nice write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2010

rom the shadowless and sorrowful Solitude of marble.... When you will rise hopelessly from prayer The twilight will fade In the black of your beautiful eyes...... strong conviction with strength of prayer.. nicely worded and appealing too....10

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An encouraging poem, uplifts and edifies. Wonderfully done; D

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 July 2010

Metaphor Epochal…with swing [You shall be a happy] and de-swing [I doubt it...]…these poetic Topsy Turvy bear high poetic vibes and readers imbibe more calorie…fine concept… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Laura Jane Wilson 23 June 2010

Thank you for sharing this poem, its beautiful.

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Adeline Foster 18 June 2010

Ah, But Perry Como caught one. Enjoyed this! Adeline

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Silver Sky 13 April 2010

Beautifully uplifting! ! ! ! ! ! Loved it! ! ! ! 10++! !

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Kishore Asthana 25 March 2010

I do hope the person this beautiful poem was dedicated to read it and it worked its magic on her.

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Roni Lane 10 January 2010

Your poem makes me think, 'He must think of beautiful poems every day! This poem lifted my spirits today and i say THANK YOU! : ]

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Ronn Michael Salinas 22 December 2009

Has sentimental elements I might never understand. But that's the beauty of dedications, right?

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Eyan Desir 29 October 2009

good write............................

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sheer amazingness! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Vanessa Cortes 15 August 2009

This is an amazing poem jsut the title itself caught my attention keep it up

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Jose Rodriguez 09 August 2009

YOU ARE THE BEST OF A NEW GENERATION KEEP GOING ON

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Romeo Della Valle

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