Friday, February 17, 2012

Ancient Wound Comments

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if heaven's rain drops, and God's tear drops
mix to fall
upon the petroglyph
of a desolate canyon wall,
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Smoky Hoss
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Danny Draper 29 February 2012

Smoky, I like this a great message with evokate imagery allegory. On a similar line I invite you to read my poem Coat of Country which I wrote last year thinking about first peoples but my fellow countrymen and women the Australian Aborigines in particular.

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Juan Olivarez 22 February 2012

The great shame of this country is that we took a warrior nation and locked them up and TOOK CARE of them. No greater injustice in my mind. Good one Smoky.

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Eric Cockrell 17 February 2012

their cry is heard in the wind that haunts our desolate streets! great poem!

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Dave Walker 17 February 2012

A really fantastic poem, great work.

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