Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Ancient Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.8

An abacus is all I need
to spell for your heart the words
I would like to tell it.
Chalk I will need too
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Jeresi Katusime
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Khairul Ahsan 25 March 2016

Your Ancient Thoughts is a wonderful poem. Some lines are truly poetic, which I liked very much: 'love is the reason why I find an orchestra in the falling rain'. and.. 'Drop the question mark Embrace the exclamation mark.'

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Agatha Eliza 27 October 2015

How precious love it! Easy to be perceived, yet so hard to be described by words. Fascinating poem! 10 +++

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Jeresi Katusime 28 October 2015

Thanks Agatha for taking the time to read.

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