Sunday, June 5, 2005

Ancient Sunlight1 Comments

Rating: 4.4

sleep child sleep, let
your tears fall into
the beatifull light.
sleep child sleep,
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 25 August 2006

This is a nice poem david. I think it is positive too. Take care.

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Nicole Carothers 01 August 2006

Vivid. 'let your tears fall into the beautiful light' I liked it very much.

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Ivy Christou 02 February 2006

delicate and endearing.. simple beautiful. HBH

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Allan James Saywell 05 June 2005

A beautiful poem from a young man with a beautiful mind, you have done well david Warm regards allan

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