Countable populace in total silence
No hustle-bustle and no interference
Still they opted to be a seclusive recluse
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I love reading these cultural poems. Learning a lot more worthwhile stuff than in high school.
Penance deeper makes our minds sharper and lives worthwhile. That is what the ancient India has shown to the world.. great composition.
A philosophical poem so full of wisdom. As always, top score with pleasure....10
Dear Indira Ma'm, a fabulous poem about the ancient sages of India and their relentless penance in quest of the absolute truth.
Your attempt to bring to lime light the dedication of great sages for LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BHAVANTU is partly successful. The tradition of such Mahatmas passed onto their disciples, later on, lost its sanctity and so the impact became less effective
A vivid depiction of ancient penance. An informative write well expressed.