Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Ancient Mystery (A Brand New Poem For All Of You) Comments

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Vividly hear thee whispers upon the edge of sleepless night.
Ancient voices of despair released from harrowed tombs.
Embracing my very soul with a rhythm of mothers care,
counting me as a Blessing in the bosom of eternal life.
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Melvina Germain
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Loke Kok Yee 21 October 2015

Melvina you have written your poem in a way quite bold this story I will need more time to unfold

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Brian Mayo 21 October 2015

Did truth's grit beneath old rocks shed the darkest and thickest tears? Magnificent. I imagined this was about someone returning in triumph after undergoing some kind of metamorphosis...

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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