Ancient Civilization Comments
Ancient civilization mushroomed in a fashion
But stood like rock for future anticipation
Brotherhood and faith were the corner stone
But in space of time everything has gone
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Re: Ancient civilization (Score: 1) by mac on Friday, June 21,2013 (16: 53: 31) if only we would learn from humanity's past, perhaps we would see world-wide peace in this life's time. a very powerful message. thank you for sharing. mac
May Fenn1 minute ago I think poetry, especially that carrying a message, is meant to be read aloud. With this poem it is impossible to do because the poet has used words that look as though they rhyme but do not. And one finds oneself faltering beause one tries to make it rhyme. I think it would be better suited if written in blank verse. Comment +1 I'm not too big on religion.
Lisa Huffman9 minutes ago You. Lost me at the first god almighty
Jeremy Taylor12 minutes ago I like how your write Comment +1 Interesting content perhaps improved by different format
Noelette Galbreth2 minutes ago Deep but I can follow the progression Comment +1 well written
Teach Sam Moyer11 minutes ago Interesting concepts. I topics revolved around religion. Comment +1 Well written
Ancient civilization mushroomed in a fashion But stood like rock for future anticipation
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