Tuesday, January 6, 2015

Ancient Brook Comments

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We almost abandoned our brook
That spits clean chill water upon the the rocks
Where our ancestors had a drink of life
Government made a burlesque
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Tony Adah
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Valsa George 07 January 2015

Brooks are perennial sources of clean water, if the premises are kept clean! Anything left unattended becomes unusable! I can imagine the old brook with a brood of toads and frogs and overgrown with ferns and covered by green algae! How nice if it had been revived! Enjoyed reading your poem!

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