Ancient it is,
The run down chapel,
Surrounded by sturdy old trees,
The emptiness lurking from behind its walls,
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This is a great poem and it was not confusing. Nice work. The terse, sparseness of the lines lends believability to the feeling, meaning, and imagery of this poem. Excellent work.
You have beautifully painted the picture of ancient Church and surrounding graveyards, it was nice to read.