Saturday, July 20, 2013

Ancient Comments

Rating: 4.8

Ancient it is,
The run down chapel,
Surrounded by sturdy old trees,
The emptiness lurking from behind its walls,
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Lucifera Santez
COMMENTS
Md Asadullah 18 January 2014

You have beautifully painted the picture of ancient Church and surrounding graveyards, it was nice to read.

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Alex Roth 26 November 2013

This is a great poem and it was not confusing. Nice work. The terse, sparseness of the lines lends believability to the feeling, meaning, and imagery of this poem. Excellent work.

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