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Shivering too is lonely
quite possible let it be
the undulating light on water puddle
too does not have much.
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My favourite line is They ancestors were capable in their wait and he in pledge. Thanks for sharing.
Woah an interesting ballad u crafted out of a mythical tale. Nice imaginative poem. I hope u read my latest too on warlords.
I was imagining something different before read your note...It was a great imaginary you made in me..i love the picture you display in the poem! and whenever i read the note, hmmm...it was helping me to get understanding of the story..but really, both stories just beautiful in your writing! _SOul
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7/25/2025 5:20:12 PM # 1.0.0
A very entertaining poem, Subodh. I enjoyed it and your notes