Monday, April 1, 2019

Anatomy Of Pain Comments

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An arrow hits to hurt, felt by brain,
And feelings are then felt of some pain.
Rage, revenge when follow
Oh like one more arrow,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2019

What a wonderful poem imbued with so much wisdom. Yes, there will be a cycle of pains and suffeeings if we nurture our hurt and pain. Liked the wonderful closure.line.10++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 April 2019

Thank you Rose Marie for spotting this poem and for your comments.

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