Tuesday, December 26, 2006

Anatomy Of Arrogance Comments

Rating: 2.0

A shivering ball of fear
wrapped in a crust of pride
too thick for sharpest arrows
huddles alone but well protected.
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Robert Charles Howard
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Susan Williams 16 April 2016

Arrogance can spring out of a totally nasty soul, but, yes, it can also spring out of a heart filled with fear as a defense mechanism. Very good expose of the topic.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2016

Yes! The terror behind the mask. Thanks for sharing.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

Arrogance well portrayed...good write..the ending lines really read good...i liked...10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

u are absolutely positively correct! ! amazing! u speak of it perfectly

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Paige S 11 April 2009

Very nice I enjoyed your description. The poem also accomplishes its task of exposing what arrogance is. Wonderful work!

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Fay Slimm 06 April 2009

A summary of excelling discernment on the subject of arrogance Robert.... first class metaphor usage too...... I really enjoyed the read and shall put this into my favourites...... greetings from Fay....

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 January 2009

a lovely depiction of arrogance...a shivering ball of fear, wrapped in a crust of pride...lovely

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a disturbing image you paint Robert, however it depicts arrogance quite accurately and portrays it with little bias or at least i read little bias coming from your works wonderfully terrifying, Timothy

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Ron Flowers 16 September 2008

This is my kind of poem, I love it. Ron

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Frank Cannon 30 July 2008

I have reviewed your assertions and findings and hold them to be anatomically irrefutable. Now may I return to my upstandingly seated position! !

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David Desantis 23 April 2008

Beautiful my friend. This is so often the case behind arrogant behavior. It hides deep insecurities. Very vivid descriptions, yet short and to the pt. I really liked

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Will Barber 17 November 2007

An eloquent penning of the limitations fear imposes upon the self. I might extend the metaphor to politics, but individual psychology will have to do, for now. The huddling fear of the novel, the unknown, is an impediment to wisdom. This poem is liberating.

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Max Reif 12 August 2007

I've certainly felt like a ball of terror with a mask. I like your evocation of fluidity in this piece, Robert, and its rather abstract quality, that yet zeroes in on true human situations.

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Mazey daisey 27 June 2007

i loved this poem..its sp true..we forget that arrogance is really a very scared AND LONELY PERSON INSIDE

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Charles, just in from a lovely vacation and read your comments about my own poetry. Thought I'd return the favor. This is the first piece of yours I've read, I think. It's absolutely brilliantly rendered and amazingly honest too. Thanks for sharing.

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Joscephine Gomez 14 May 2007

A high C held six bars-long and fortissimo goes for this beautiful poem.

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Ilana Cofield 08 April 2007

This is an excellent poem. It really shows how arrogant people are really not overly confident like the appear to be but actually frightened and so afraid of showing their vulnerable side.

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Aldo Kraas 30 January 2007

A good poem Robert Two thumbs up

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Not a member No 4 27 January 2007

A truly unpleasant but often sad device for concealing the awful truth - nothing of value, to either self or others! Strange how often the most capable and rounded human beings are the most humble, while their shallow opposites slip so naturally into this disguise. A razor sharp analysis Robert - would apply to the classic bully personality just as effectively, though it might be difficult to separate the two. Wise beyond words as usual!

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alice sunderland 15 January 2007

brilliant stuff. great description of my most despised human frailty. nice one al.

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