Saturday, January 26, 2008

Anatomy Of A Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

A blue, blissful seed
Bubbles to breathe
Its breaths are quite quick
For the dire dirt is heavenly high
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Zia Jaycee May Trent
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Mary Gordley 26 January 2008

Very lovely use of language, you bring the flower to bloom before the reader's eyes. Thanks.

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Beautiful, a bit like a stop-sequence of pictures, you watch the seed, germinate and flower before your eyes.

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