Dear Poet
A tanka consists of 5 lines and 31 syllables.
Each line has a set number of syllables see below:
Line 1 – 5 syllables
Line 2 – 7 syllables
Line 3 – 5 syllables
Line 4 – 7 syllables
Line 5 – 7 syllables
but Your line-
brewing turmoil all round (6 syllables)
we make no fuss (4 syllables)
sorry for comment
dear poet,
Thanks for your comment. The errors are due to oversight! I have modified the lines as below:
brewing turmoil all around ;
while we make no fuss.
Thanks once again!
dear poet,
Thanks for comment. Indeed there were 2 syllables less, as you have pointed out. I have now made corrections as below:
brewing turmoil all around
while we make no fuss
I appreciate your comments.
thanks and regards
narayana aghalaya
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Dear Poet A tanka consists of 5 lines and 31 syllables. Each line has a set number of syllables see below: Line 1 – 5 syllables Line 2 – 7 syllables Line 3 – 5 syllables Line 4 – 7 syllables Line 5 – 7 syllables but Your line- brewing turmoil all round (6 syllables) we make no fuss (4 syllables) sorry for comment
dear poet, Thanks for your comment. The errors are due to oversight! I have modified the lines as below: brewing turmoil all around ; while we make no fuss. Thanks once again!
dear poet, Thanks for comment. Indeed there were 2 syllables less, as you have pointed out. I have now made corrections as below: brewing turmoil all around while we make no fuss I appreciate your comments. thanks and regards narayana aghalaya