I want to make it quite clear.....
my heart is not a thoroughfare.
i long for never-never land
for honest people, nice and fair.
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I long for never never land for honest people nice and fair, nice quote Shahzia, so do I but it is hard to find in this world. good write enjoyed
Sun shines through this mist of hope...... When we are able to behold a silver lining amid dark clouds, we can be sure that not all is lost! When hope springs from despair, life remains never a burden, but one of sweet anticipation! An enjoyable read!
Wow! ! ! The starting lines are so pleasurable and got my whole attention. Love the attitude! ! ! I want to make it quite clear..... my heart is not a thoroughfare. Lovely! ! ! im fed up of this love-sick air. I just loved the attitude in this poem! ! ! :)
at last a liberating free thinking poem.... this shows such strength and lifted my spirits....you write as my sister thinks.... no holds barred...loved it...tyvm karen
A really nice poem, I invite you to read my poems and comment if you like, Thanks for the nice read.
I want to make it quite clear..... my heart is not a thoroughfare. it's an attitude poem :)
so time is up, so words are spent, so i intend to go, ....but where? the best verses of you...
don't feel like left out in this world.get going and enjoy life.nice write.keep inking.
You didnot dishearten my expectation when I sat down to read your poem. Incredibly well furnished and when it is done with so few lines its certain that it came from a genius. Thanks.
sun shines through this mist of despair' is no doubt a very beautiful line. The whole poem is replete with deep ideas.
sun shines through this mist of despair' is no doubt a very beautiful line. The whole poem is replete with deep ideas.
Misinterpretation of love can be an anarchy/ A well-written poem! ! ! !
Misinterpretation of love can be an anarchy/ A well-written poem! ! ! !
lolzzz....whop! took a great swipe at the site enjoyed it :)
Superb message and very true.