Saturday, December 24, 2011

Anarchy Comments

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I want to make it quite clear.....
my heart is not a thoroughfare.
i long for never-never land
for honest people, nice and fair.
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Shahzia Batool
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 12 August 2013

Superb message and very true.

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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2013

I long for never never land for honest people nice and fair, nice quote Shahzia, so do I but it is hard to find in this world. good write enjoyed

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Valsa George 01 July 2013

Sun shines through this mist of hope...... When we are able to behold a silver lining amid dark clouds, we can be sure that not all is lost! When hope springs from despair, life remains never a burden, but one of sweet anticipation! An enjoyable read!

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Passionate Reader 25 June 2013

Wow! ! ! The starting lines are so pleasurable and got my whole attention. Love the attitude! ! ! I want to make it quite clear..... my heart is not a thoroughfare. Lovely! ! ! im fed up of this love-sick air. I just loved the attitude in this poem! ! ! :)

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Karen Sinclair 16 May 2013

at last a liberating free thinking poem.... this shows such strength and lifted my spirits....you write as my sister thinks.... no holds barred...loved it...tyvm karen

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Patricia Grantham 02 February 2013

A really nice poem, I invite you to read my poems and comment if you like, Thanks for the nice read.

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Sun Shine 25 January 2013

I want to make it quite clear..... my heart is not a thoroughfare. it's an attitude poem :)

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Shumaila Bari 22 June 2012

so time is up, so words are spent, so i intend to go, ....but where? the best verses of you...

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 April 2012

don't feel like left out in this world.get going and enjoy life.nice write.keep inking.

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Aman Sa 05 March 2012

You didnot dishearten my expectation when I sat down to read your poem. Incredibly well furnished and when it is done with so few lines its certain that it came from a genius. Thanks.

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 03 March 2012

sun shines through this mist of despair' is no doubt a very beautiful line. The whole poem is replete with deep ideas.

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 03 March 2012

sun shines through this mist of despair' is no doubt a very beautiful line. The whole poem is replete with deep ideas.

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Vipins Puthooran 27 December 2011

Misinterpretation of love can be an anarchy/ A well-written poem! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 27 December 2011

Misinterpretation of love can be an anarchy/ A well-written poem! ! ! !

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Saadat Tahir 25 December 2011

lolzzz....whop! took a great swipe at the site enjoyed it :)

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Shahzia Batool

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