Anamika Comments

This is a gem of a write... nice nice

Egos’ were given prime importance And I was left to fate Not to seek your mere attendance Let me know the greatest crime I committed? ...............i like this stanza most... emotionally charged poem...9

Great poem indeed.. Keep penning... Read some of my work. Hope you'll like it

Anamika meaning unnamed in hindi is an apt title to this emotional poem of yours. It is sad that children feel orphaned because of absence of love due to ego clashes of parents. What will you call this love? Anamika...very true. Well penned.

I can gauge the depth of desperation felt by Anamika as I too have dealt with the same topic in two of my poems- Lone Traveller and Bonsai... When you find time, have a look at them! Poignantly narrated, Queeny!

i value your sense of writing. go ahead

An inspirational poem. So many young lives are lost to the fate of circumstances.

An excellent craft of intense feelings so enticingly expressed. The rendering is superb too Queeny.