Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Anal Avalanche Comments

Rating: 5.0

Erotic rewrite of David Cook's Avalanche

I feel alive inside you
And all at once when you moan and move like that againest me
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Ramona Thompson
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Richard Ponsonby 26 January 2020

Hello Ramona, well you've really let it rip in this one, and obviously excited Elena and I like its outspoken scatology but it isn't an acrostic, otherwise, excellent

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Elena Winters 13 January 2009

wow very amusing i must say it can really give someone an orgy but i loved it.....it kind of reminds me of the books i read. moast of them are urban and erotica tales so i like this a lot and a 10 goes a long way with me

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