Sunday, July 18, 2021

An X-Ray Comments

Rating: 4.2

An X-Ray
baby, I saw your insides all the way
I saw your outside completely before me
but you've never been
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Rebecca Navarre 19 July 2021

Oh, how cute and adorable! .. With feelings I'm sure many can relate to when it comes to relationships! .. An awesome poem! .. Excellently expressed, with TLC! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Varsha M 19 July 2021

Sylvia I didn't know you have this quality too. Hahaha x-ray visibility. Nothing is visible. Only skeley. If you know bones its good. If meral is there that is also visible rest all is. Nothing obvious.

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M Asim Nehal 18 July 2021

Very difficult to read someone's mind and heart, X-rays will not help but the L-Rays will do the magic. L~ Love....This is what I felt after reading your thought provoking poem.5***

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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