Saturday, May 17, 2008

An Urban Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer is upon the city again, and this time it’s far worse
The people of the city consider it as God’s vile curse
Of course, the excessive, oppressive heat is no sudden thing
Something called “global warming” has added to this suffering
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Catherine Adedipe 18 May 2008

i live in canada...and i look forward to summer...but your poem successfully convinces that summer is not so good after all with facts combined with finesse....good job

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 May 2008

summer when shouts high thirst yet cries incessant life seems to be horrible by the rath of sweltering sun...............lovely write, summer when in its crown, a vivuid description summer across the country, weather still intolerable, , , , , well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Siliguri, West Bengal, India
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