Tuesday, July 31, 2007

An Urban Phenomena Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night was the faded negative
Rummaged from a family album
Trees were the elegant gymnasts
Petrified in a moment of time
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leonard daranjo
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Sandra Fowler 02 August 2007

Superb use of metaphor to convey your nocturnal message. The music of the natural world goes fainter. Only the discerning soul can hear its inner cry. Very touching, Leonard. Warm regards, Sandra

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Indira Babbellapati 31 July 2007

how true...ponds gasping, reads great!

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