deep in the ring of life
one needs yeast
to rise above
the burden of labor
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Very good metaphorical allusion. Deep and thought provoking
This is very good work, so inspiring, thankyou Ben Love duncan X
How sweet! . Sounds like a calm breeze with a heavenly view. Kind regards Aine
'Ring, yeast, rise, labor and grace': a quintet of power packed images that evoke the resilience of life. Thanks for a marvelously uplifting poem!