Tuesday, December 29, 2009

An Upcoming War Comments

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Rumbling erupted throughout the ground.
The grass and trees stood still.
The damp field grew to become no sound.
Fire against your own will.
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

wow! this one's awesome!

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Louise Levicky 29 December 2009

Hello! I really like this poem. I find your use of imagery creative, and I like the theme. Well done.

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Anna Greco

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