An Unwritten Song Comments

, , , what a great work this is, , , , truly, , , verry powerful, , as everybody has commented, ,

so powerful are your words, sir, throughout the poem..hope judgement comes soon...

The same story every where, a nice write.

We are told again and again that we get a Government we just deserve and in near future we are going to have anarchy if democracy of the kind fails

Thanks, Madam Valsa, for your encouraging comments. Whether one likes it or not, there are times when inevitable seems so very near and that obviously affects your thought process.

At an age when my epitaph need be written, I hold this pen in shaking hands, Somehow I feel my cry of anguish Will reach you and shake you out of slumber And stall their entry to power chambers Very powerful lines, though I greatly diapprove of onething.... It is not yet time to write your epitaph... Let there be many many years of active poetic career ahead when you will be voicing your moral indignation from time to time over the corruption and injustice seen around.... Great write!