Saturday, January 30, 2010

An Unwilling Lover's Secret Comments

Rating: 5.0

He smiles, a sweet seduction,
His eyes squint, my timeless memory,
Every curve on his lips are imprinted on my finger tips,
Lovely is the way he stares, with arousing secrecy,
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Chiamaka Okorie
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Uche Chidozie 14 November 2011

'He smiles, a sweet seduction' like this line so much, this short poem is an organised piece, expressing the deep feeling someone has over his/her lover to be, but according to the poet she don't know whether this emotion will work out, but that will hunt so badly to refuse one this opportunity.good work.

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Lilian106 Lilian106 14 November 2011

this is beautiful...what a sorrowful love?

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fleur de lys 30 January 2010

An intriguing poem Chaimaka that perfectly captures the essence of temptation...!

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