# An Untold Story Of A Pebble Comments

Earth has thousands of untold stories. This one is especially poignant. Beautiful write, Mamta. Love, SandraX

i am that pebble... love is that pebble... life is that pebble.... we all are pebbles... sad, let me tell you something.. a river near to my village home had innumerable pebbles... now they rest on courtyards of the rich... greed of men can make even a pebble immovable...

Being a lover of Philosophy, I look upon this pebble as a precious little life - lying on the vast shores of humanity, - to be finally consumed into the lap of Eternity! 10! -Raj Nandy

PHILOSOPHICAL with great imagery and good flow.

Desires instant, want to acquire Whether time and energy fall in line? How many of us can listen To the inner voice before acquire? In a philosopher's quote - 'We have two ears and one mouth so that we can listen twice as much as we speak.” Wonderful, wonderful and wonderful Feeling within me to read this poem About the inner meaning this poem gave me. Dear Poet, Heartfelt feelings from me On this poem of yours.

Our lives are also like a pebble carried away by wave of time, some told some untold. Every tiny thing has a philosophy of its life and a lesson to learn. A nice poem worthy to read........10/10.

the tale of a worn out pebble...waiting to recite its story at sunset...time and tide won't wait for any...be it man pebble or life...a write beautifully philosophic...good piece...10

Beautifully written, Mamta. We must grasp the wonder of each moment right now, always, and you have captured the truth of this. We will always miss the untold story of that pebble. Well done: -) Ted

The beauty of simple nature captured in natures ways.