An Untold Love Comments

On a full moon I bide on a boat for thy Until ache twilight horizon- Behind apart from time- A mature pensive ripened, An abstract passion craved for romance Truly beautiful, a nice lovely poem, I have no alternate but to rate it 10 and include in my favorite poems.

A train carried me from dark to light, can be compared to our teachers and parents who carry us back to Allah Your poem has great intensity

Romance.... I feel this is one of the best pieces I have read.

so romantically piece of art. now i think this love is told it is no more else untold. best ~nb .

So true.... This is indeed an abstract poem craved for romance. The way you have put your words is so beautiful that it makes me feel beautiful about love.... I loved this.... I actually did...! !

That is one lovely piece dear. I liked the way you used your words. imaginative and poetic. Loved the flow of the poem and sweet sounds. Very well done

good piece of romantic poetry well expressed in superb imagery. Wish may your untold love have a louder and passionate echo to the silent ears of your love to make her know your intense love.

well- crafted images/ a romantic poem! ! !

lovely poetry! i like it, ,

yah, a good one and keep going on bhi-po

well written piece with a wonderful use of language

how beautiful...i have also written on the same topic, i don't know if had read it or not.....but really bravo sir

Romantic love hidden in your heart but it shine in every word of u thanks

images are crafted well but lack cohesion...... poem must be well constructed... there must be a logical sequence among scene, lines and even feelings, no doubt you did it well but my humble wit expected more from your genius..... good effort.....keep penning and ponder, tnx dear

verry nice and romantic poem.moon is verry special for loving hearts, ever.

oh my god what a creation........i am dumbstruck...reading this.....hats off

Love is real. Your poem is real. Go on.

Well crafted in the mould of a passionate account given for appreciation of a great phase in love. The power of untold love is often more captivative... Thanks for inviting..I wish you too a very very Happy new year...

An untold love - very romantic and inspired write.

An emotional quest for your untold love, the pain you feel is still real, so beautifully written!