An Untold Beauty Comments

Hi Ciarán, I like your way in telling about the untold beauty, especially each first line of each paragraphs, they're simple, but also deep and complicated, I like 'There is no faith in what is plain to see' and 'A little glimpse of what the saints can see'. They both are the greatest part of this poem.

A striking poem with an inner strength. I like the metaphor of the snow.10.

'A little glimpse of what the saints can see, / changed the route of all there is to bequeath, / My unholy heart is mesmerised by the peace, / that her aura of perfection showered upon me.' Beauty is actually found, when he discovers it in one virtuous and was touched. Adorable.

A poem of striking contrasts. Very beautiful.

Those truthful eyes awoke my sinking soul, Rachel Ann Butler