Wednesday, March 13, 2019

An Unseen Plight Comments

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The Beam on their face made me look amused,
Their laughter, their chuckle, their mirth
How could they make me so happy when I am not among them,
The cloudburst can't hold me back from serving them
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Nikita Gupta
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Mahtab Bangalee 18 June 2019

I feel doleful when I see them- Begging, starving, homeless, clothless.../// it's humanistic sense; good write

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Prabir Gayen 04 April 2019

Beautiful poem dear poetess..... thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 April 2019

NICE FLOW LET MORE COME AND LET GO

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Ayan Mondal 15 March 2019

The Beam on their face made me look amused, Their laughter, their chuckle, their mirth How could they make me so happy when I am not among them, The cloudburst can't hold me back from serving them Even though I can stay no longer with them But their smile and merriment Will always make me cherish the time.....what a imagary! ! ...splended.

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Nikita Gupta 04 April 2019

Thanks a lot

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