Wednesday, July 8, 2009

An Unseen Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cry
Plee for help between sobs
No one understands
For my pain is on the inside
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Danny H 09 July 2009

Much emotion, and imagery in this poem. it was very well described, your pain: : extremely creative

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Unseen pains become visible on eyes and pages.10.

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rago rago 08 July 2009

an unseen pain always hurt more innerconscience shutters and the pain penetrate all nerves and the veins too burst into tears........ you have written well..........

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