An Unseen Love Comments

OMG, so deep, sweet and painful. u have a golden heart honey. but by the way, who's ~N~?

a good write. great imagination. very touching

Young Ellias a most heartfelt and sincere poem. I salute you sailor man.

nice witten.good rhyme, so meaningful.full of regret and frailty and the feeling of loving another creature.nice work.

A lovely poem with a great mystery right to the end, well done.

Ellias, your poem has special rhyme, in reading time i enjoy so much.