Saturday, June 27, 2009

# # An Unplanned Journey Comments

Rating: 4.1

no travel agent
no travel schedule
no tickets taken
no luggage packed there in
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Ranjit Ravindran 18 October 2009

that final journey.....some anxiously await it...some fear it...some don't even bother... whatever be the case the journey has to be taken for once and for ever.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2009

you bring out well the message on meaning of life...thanks...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 08 July 2009

very soulful write... When we travel towards our 'main' destination... leaving our body behind us...very touching..very true.. very nice write Sam... maia

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Meggie Gultiano 07 July 2009

and i want to add this, Sam..We are nothing.Somewhere, you left a message and this is very powerful for me..I love this

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Very profound and different samanyan. Our imaginations can take us wherever we want to go. 10 Karin Anderson

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Sandra Fowler 02 July 2009

A soul write indeed. Strength for the journey, my friend.10+. Warm regards, Sandra

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Seema Aarella 30 June 2009

Amazing write....apt thoughts and descriptions...we all do so many things by obligation of duty without applying our soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Really a good read...Thanks!

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Joseph Poewhit 29 June 2009

Like pulling a tree out of the ground. - NOTHING

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Raj Arumugam 29 June 2009

an exciting journey...an out-of body experience?

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Ken E Hall 28 June 2009

No plans best idea...live and enjoy no plans only insurance life is beautiful .a....10 regards...

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Fay Slimm 28 June 2009

We can all take that journey at any time Sam - -and glad you have reminded us of the opportunity we have to be - - just free....10 + ++ Fay

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Smiley Hooker 28 June 2009

Very impressive, Sam. Don't leave yet, we need you here.: -)

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 June 2009

True when we came, we were empty handed. When we take the final journey, we go empty handed. This truth is highlighted in the poem well.

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Naidz Ladia 27 June 2009

mental telepathy...or is it only a vision? ...naizz

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Ency Bearis 27 June 2009

a journey in a dream must be.....interesting...10

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Sandra Martyres 27 June 2009

A great piece Samanyan....you leave your reader to decipher the nature of your unplanned journey....10 from me

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Pandian Angelina 27 June 2009

Death a parent who leads us From this child's play on earth To other worthy work on high What a stupendous thought The parent holds our hand And leads us on, so, no fear Other players may shed a tear But soon forget and resume to play! As always your thoughts are so different, refreshing and inspiring. Angel

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Ramesh T A 27 June 2009

A free ticketless journey reserved for all at any moment in life! True!

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~ Jon London ~ 27 June 2009

Weightless and free.....you now fly..............send us a post card my brother....great flowing piece....with a depth that is felt my brother....nice work

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Tsira Goge 27 June 2009

Or on the contrary, have planned till the born.... all the same, it is a fine poem...10... All best, Tsira

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