Saturday, November 22, 2014

An Unpassionate Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

standing in the doorway
in her see through lingerie
thought about our trip to Norway
and shop that sold patisserie
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Lee Fones
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 22 November 2014

Expression of love a wonderful feeling in human mind which is nicely written in the poem.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 22 November 2014

her blonde flowing hair her eyes bluer than the sea reminded me of a pair the best I've ever see Beautiful poem on love theme. I enjoyed it.Well done Keep it up.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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