An Unnamed Pain Comments

Just like the soggy surroundings, In the dank confines of my soul, An unknown pain seeks redemption. I don't know why I feel a mariner Drifting far away from the port Silence burns inside And thoughts bleed in silence! ......so touching and impressive with nice theme. A beautiful poem on life nicely shared.10

Leaves shed drops of tears Time moves at snail's pace There is a dull languor As usual, you always create contemplating images. what an image of time that moves in snake pace. You are always marvelous, Lady.

Thanks for inviting me to this poem. I can perfectly empathize. A write as aching as a silent sunset.

Let me GUESS. this is about ME, isn’t it? I haven’t started to read it (except the title) , but I just ‘have a feeling’ it is about ME! ok, not about me, OR is it? this calls for a private message to valsa. bri :)

A lovely poem. Possibly describing the anguish of depression? Some beautiful touches. I especially like.......... Silence burns inside And thoughts bleed in silence!

You have given light to otherwise ambiguous pain and gloom. Some time so hard to pin point. Beautiful poem.

I do agree with you at times pain cannot be explained, It has got nostalgic character accompanied with silence. Imagination nicely painted, thanks for sharing!

An unknown pain seeks redemption Great expression of feeling and it really feels. wonderful imagination......

Leaves shed drops of tears Cloudy days bring feelings like those expressed in the poem. Nicely put. Thank you.

Pain has no past and future yet it carries always its present and springs out of the blue.....Valsa.......nicely crafted with beautiful words

Unnamed pain, unknown, yet so well described that the reader could feel and empathize with you. Simple and evocative. Great write.

There are many feelings that cannot be named, but one feels it, sometimes he is made happy by the feelings and sometimes sad, why he cannot tell the reason. A nice picture of such feelings.