Wednesday, November 14, 2018

An Unknown Flutist Played In My Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

I covered myself
with several layers
of transparent fineness.
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Dev Anand
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Bhavika Jain 23 November 2018

It's a really nice poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 November 2018

there is so much sexiness in you @ 40 how many at a time can manage you all gals will seem to be in blue waiting in your long QQQQQQQQQQQQQ How mange them would you poemise kindly will ye

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Dr Shakira Nandini 16 November 2018

as per winter this poem is perfect match.10++++++++, thanks for sharing Mr. Dev Anand

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Unwritten Soul 15 November 2018

Hi Dev, thanks for inviting me to read your new poem... I think i want you to write more about sweetness of heart like a story.. Maybe you can make a poem like that as it a bit different.

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Sarah Persson 15 November 2018

Dev this is a very poem with some very good sensual lines. Well written. I'm not sure the last line is needed though.

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