Tuesday, June 26, 2012

An Unknown Dialogue Comments

Rating: 3.2

Million stories given, few received
A smile, a cry, a piece of joy, a fragment of suspense
in a circle of something greater
I could sit here and wonder
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Kasia Fedyk
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Savita Tyagi 05 July 2012

Loved it. Each thought complete in itself yet so gracefully becoming part of whole.

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Neela Nath Das 29 June 2012

Very nice write.Love your style.

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Prakhar Mishra 29 June 2012

as robert frost says in 'fire and ice' that both destroy the world and here when they are in the same place then the massive term ' destroy ' gets destroyed and our nature doesnt allow them to meet normally so one has to be taking one side but again the thing i saw was love was flowing on your lips which i personally admire thanks p.m.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 28 June 2012

Million stories given, few received A smile, a cry, a piece of joy, a fragment of suspense in a circle of something greater I could sit here and wonder opening lines are too perfect! ! u're truly wonderful with this one! !

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Wabi Sabi 28 June 2012

this is a massive theme for life beings that gets connected to four dimention. truth telling people get as time goes by. beautiful! how can you get to sense these things?

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You know when dreams like a deep valley and the morning dew in its sweetness that tries to stay for long but the sun dries the tears until the dawn comes the next time................ speechless Kasia

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Shouvik Roy 27 June 2012

Lovely.. :) poignant, what if this fire wanted some water what does the water want? loved these lines, such depth, , :)

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