Monday, July 20, 2009

An Unknown Bird Comments

Rating: 3.8

One sunny afternoon,
Just as i bade a friend 'see you soon'.
My long shadow on the sunny ground met that of a long tree
As i looked up to it, i saw an unknown beautiful bird flying free
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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 August 2009

finely penned! the bird metaphor excellent! 10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 July 2009

A bird, known or unknown, can evoke so many thoughts. Good write Uchenna. Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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