Wednesday, February 10, 2016

An Uninvited Guest Comments

Rating: 5.0

Opened the door of my room...
and there he was in front of me....
A cockroach...!
Looking for all
...
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Jaishree Nair
COMMENTS
Valsa George 10 February 2016

Such uninvited guests are a sure menace! I don't know if I will regret such an action that stirred a sense of remorse in you! But I really appreciate your ability to have invested this trivial incident with all the embellishment of a beautiful poem, Jaishree!

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Kelly Kurt 10 February 2016

I feel the same way, Jaishree. I have pardoned many an arthropod for their 'indiscretion' of sharing the earth with me

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 February 2016

Making ordinary moments and events special and memorable is a quality of good poem. Your poem is an ideal example of that phenomenon. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Dimitrios Galanis 10 February 2016

Eraised high up to a poem an ordinary moment.That is real poesy.

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