Friday, October 30, 2015

An Unhappy Life Comments

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An Unhappy Life

I was romping and rollicking with fun
Standing on a treacherous bog
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shakil ahmed
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Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2015

A philosophic poem but thinking of death at this stage of life! Anyway a a nice poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2015

The mouth of death leads us to the grave. Nice work.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 06 November 2015

Aren't you still too young to see yourself at the mouth of death? I read and enjoyed this sad poem! All this music and all that noise again! It's a pity, though I can understand if life has treated you too badly! But isn't there always a personal choice in how to live?

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Sanjukta Nag 04 November 2015

This is life, at some point we all have to face this. Well knitted with nice images. Thank you.10

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Muhammad Ali 04 November 2015

Philosophical. Nice poem. I agree life is a drama But do we play it? ? ?

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2015

I can relate and sympathize. Thanks, Shakil Peace

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