Monday, January 12, 2015

An Unforgettable Dawn Comments

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It was dusk of a moonless night,
No moon is below the blue umbrella,
Stars are there and still it's bright,
I am walking with lovely sweet Cinderella.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Salini Nair 13 January 2015

All pains all worries I today excise, A beautiful moon comes into my arms, What a dawn is it when sun did not rise! Just like her mother she is full of charms.............................awesome write...like it

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Valsa George 13 January 2015

On a beautiful dawn, a lovely daughter was born to you as lovely as her mother! It must have been a great moment of rejoicing! I too share your joy!

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Sarmad Mirza 12 January 2015

Very Beautiful poem with lovely thought :)

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Khalid Saifullah 12 January 2015

It's an amazing and beautiful write.....................10

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