An Unfolding Heart. Comments

Absolutely beautiful, Fay. Every so often something - someone - comes along to thaw the frozen heart that has survived the longest time of loneliness. May your heart never be so lonely. Much love, Kev.

A heartening poem on love, hope. Beautifully composed

A revitalised heart is a wonderous thing, happiness to your life can bring, your poem thinks of the future and the part your heart has to play but still holding a special place for the past. May your heart stay warm as your poetry 10 +++ Chhris

I like this Fay you wrote this good sierra

I like the title fits the poem great. The title is my friends poetry book title awesome Dan

Your use of ice, frozen, cold, hard and then melting & rainbows & lightning - ah, you are so clever & your words unfold into the most amazing poetry - thank you. That was wonderful to read 10/10 Fay