Saturday, November 7, 2020

An Unfair Keeper Comments

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My God, why do You love a few for no reason
And shower them with bliss? — An act of treason
Against those whom You have impaired and left
Nothing at all, a life lame and bereft.
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Vaibhav Simha
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Bri Edwards 11 November 2020

1 - a little clarification for glossary: " What does Durst mean? verb. Archaic. simple past tense of dare **." AND: dare ** (2 definitions) " 1. have the courage to do something. " a story he dare not write down" h Similar: be brave enough have the courage etc. 2. (i wouldn't use this one) defy or challenge (someone) to do something. (cont.)

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bri edwards 11 November 2020

1 - a little clarification for glossary: " What does Durst mean? verb. Archaic. simple past tense of dare **." AND: dare ** (2 definitions) " 1. have the courage to do something. " a story he dare not write down" h Similar: be brave enough have the courage etc. 2. (i wouldn't use this one) defy or challenge (someone) to do something. (cont.)

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Valsa George 09 November 2020

To a deprived and depraved man, God's acts may seem very unjust! The Almighty showers blessings upon blessings on a few while a majority are fated to live in utter misery and want! To ordinary mortals, this is a disparity unpardonable. The conifers grow tall and sturdy in the orchard and the creepers are unable to thrive without support! God's justice who can truly measure? A beautiful poem!

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2020

I MUST BE TRULY " DEPRIVED AND DEPRAVED" ! ! Really, i'm at least deprived. bri :)

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