Wednesday, June 10, 2009

An Unexpected Betrayal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today, my eyes are filled,
I can’t breathe, my feelings are killed
I don’t shed a tear but my tears shed me
I went ahead but then m y heart froze,
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Sanya Zahid
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Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

i like this extended metaphor; 'You’re not a memory, not even a dream'' this lyric poem has selective ideas all poetically arranged lovely to read..10++

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